Tuesday, July 3, 2018

Book 1 Part 2 Chapter 2 (Chapter 28 overall)

Chapter Summaries: Dole: Arrival of Kutuzof. The review. Prince Andrei and Nesvitsky. Zherkof. The Hussar mimic. Prince Andrei reminds Kutuzof of Dolokof. Timokhin's account of Dolokhof. Regimental comments on Kutuzof. "Singers to the front!" Zherkof tries to make friends with Dolokhof.
Briggs: The inspection takes place. Zherkov and Dolokhov.

Translation:

II.
— Coming! — shouted at this time the signaller.

The regimental commander, blushing, ran up to a horse, with trembling hands took the stirrup, was thrown across his body, recovered, took out a sword and with a happy, decisive face, on one side of his mouth, prepared to give a shout. The regiment was startled, as a recovering bird, and froze.

— Quieeeeet! — shouted the regimental commander in a terrific soulful voice, joyful to himself, strict in regards to the regiment and affable in regards to the coming of the chief.

By the wide, cased woods, on a big, roadless way, a little from the rumbling springs, very weakly trotted a high blue Vienna carriage train. Behind the carriage rode a suite and a convoy of Croats. Beside Kutuzov sat an Austrian general in a strange, among the black Russians, white uniform. The carriage stopped at the regiment. Kutuzov and the Austrian general about something quietly spoke, and Kutuzov smiled a little, in that time heavily stepping, he lowered his leg with a step, exactly as if there were not these 2000 people that without breathing looked at him and at the regimental commander.

Rang out the shout of the commanders, more regiment ringing trembled, in the guard. In the dead silence was heard the weak voice of the commander in chief. The regiment barked: “Wish for your health, your ex-ex-cel-lency!” and again all froze. First Kutuzov stood in the same location, while the regiment moved; then Kutuzov nearby with the white general, on foot, accompanied by the suite, began to walk by the rows.

By this, as the regimental commander saluted the commander in chief, glaring at his eyes, stretching out and picking up, as tilting forward went behind the generals by rows, barely holding from shivering in movement, so jumping at each word and movement of the commander in chief, — It was seen that he carried out his responsibilities of a subordinate still with more enjoyment than the responsibilities of a chief. The regiment, thanks to the severity and diligence of the regimental commander, was in beautiful condition relative to the others coming at that same time to Braunau. The retrograded and sick were only 217 persons. And all was in good order besides the shoes.

Kutuzov passed by the rows, occasionally stopping and speaking several affectionate words to officers whom he knew from the Turkish war, but sometimes to soldiers. Glancing at the footwear, he a few times sadly rocked his head and pointed out to the Austrian general with such an expression that how he would not reproach in this anybody, but he could not see how this was so bad. The regimental commander every time at this ran forward, fearing missing a word of the commander in chief regarding the regiment. Behind Kutuzov, at such a distance that all weakly spoken words could be heard, was a suite of 20 persons. The gentlemen of the suite talked between themselves and sometimes laughed. Nearest of all behind the commander in chief was walking a nice adjutant. This was Prince Bolkonsky. Nearby him was walking his fellow Nesvitsy, a tall staff officer, extremely thick, with a kind, smiling beautiful face and wet eyes. Nesvitsky barely held from laughter, excited by a blackish hussar officer walking beside him. The hussar officer, not smiling, not changing expressions stopped his eyes, with a severe face watched the back of the regimental commander and mimicked each of his moves. Every time, as the regimental commander shuddered and bent forward, exactly the same, and exactly the same, shuddered and bent forward the hussar officer. Nesvitsky laughed and pushed others, so that they would look at the fun.

Kutuzov was walking slowly and sluggishly by the thousand eyes that rolled out of his orbit, keeping for the chief. Getting up with the 3rd company, he suddenly stopped. The suite, not foreseeing these stops, unwittingly moved forward to him.

— Ah, Timohin! — said the commander in chief, recognizing the captain with a red nose, suffering for the blue overcoat.

It seemed, one cannot be more stretched out as Timohin stretched out in that time as the regimental commander made his comment. Yet at this moment the treatment to him by the commander in chief stretched out the captain so that it seemed, looking at his commander in chief still a few more times, the captain could not withstand it; and because Kutuzov, apparently realizing his position and wished, the opposite for any good captain, hastily turned away. By the puffy, disfigured wounded of the face of Kutuzov ran a little bit of a noticeable smile.

— Another Izmailovsky fellow, — he said. — The brave officer! You are satisfied with them? — asked Kutuzov to the regimental commander.

And the regimental commander, reflected, as in a mirror, invisible to himself, by the hussar officer, flinched, came up forward and responded:

— Very satisfied, your excellence.

— We all are not without weakness, — said Kutuzov, smiling and walking away from him. — In him is commitment to Bacchus.

The regimental commander was scared, whether or not he was to blame for this, and replied with nothing. The officer at this moment saw the face of the captain with a red nose and tight stomach and so appeared to mimic his face and pose that Nesvitsky could not hold his laughter. Kutuzov turned around. It was seen that the officer could manage his face as he wanted to: at that moment, as Kutuzov turned around, the officer had the time to do a grimace, but following that accepted a most serious, respectful and innocent expression.

The third company was last, and Kutuzov thought, apparently recalling something. Prince Andrey came forward from the suite and in French quietly said:

— You ordered to remind about the demoted Dolohov in this regiment.

— Where here is Dolohov? — asked Kutuzov.

Dolohov, now disguised in a soldier’s gray overcoat, did not wait for him to be called. A slender blond figure with clear blue eyes came forward from the front. He came up to the commander in chief and the guard.

— Pretense? — frowning a little, asked Kutuzov.

— This is Dolohov, — said Prince Andrey.

—Ah! — said Kutuzov. — I hope that this lesson corrects you, serve very well. The sovereign is merciful. And I will not forget you, should you deserve it.

Blue clear eyes looked at the commander in chief with the same cockiness, as at the regimental commander, as if his expression broke the conditional veil separating the so far away commander in chief from the soldier.

— All I beg, your excellence, — he said in his sonorous, solid, unhurried voice. — I beg to give me a case to make amends for my blame and to prove my loyalty to the sovereign and emperor and Russia.

Kutuzov turned away. In his face flashed that same smile in his eye, as at that time when he turned away from Captain Timohin. He turned away and grimaced, as if he wanted to express by this, that all that he said to Dolohov, and all that he could say to him, he for a long, long time knew that all this now bored him and that all this is really not needed. He turned away and directed to the carriage.

The regiment sorted out by company and directed to the assigned apartments near from Braunau, where they hoped to put on shoes, get dressed and relax after difficult transitions.

— You do not have a pretense to me, Prohor Ignatich? — said the regimental commander, going around and moving to the place of the 3rd company and going ahead to Captain Timohin. The face of the regimental commander expressed after the happily departed review uncontrollable joy. — The service to the tsar... cannot be... at a different time in the front to break off... excuse me first, you know I am... very thankful! — and he held out his hand to the company.

— Have mercy, general, and if I dare! — was the response of the captain, with his blushing nose, smiling and revealing a smile lacking two front teeth, knocked out before Izmailovsky.

— Yes to mister Dolohov deliver that I will not forget him, so he can be calm. Yes say, please, I wanted to ask how he leads himself? And all...

— By service very good, your excellency... but in character... — said Timohin.

— But what in character? — asked the regimental commander.

— He finds, your excellency, on days, — spoke the captain, — smart, and learned, and nice. And also as an animal. In Poland he killed a Jew, please know...

— Well yes, well yes, — said the regimental commander, — all need to pity young men in misfortunes. Because of the large communication... so you understand...

— I am listening, your excellency, — said Timohin, his smile giving the feeling that he understood the willingness of the chief.

— Well yes, well yes.

The regimental commander found in the ranks of Dolohov and held a horse.

— To the first affairs — epaulettes, — he said to him.

Dolohov turned back, saying nothing and not changing the expression of his mockingly smiling mouth.

— Well, here and good, — continued the regimental commander. — people to have a cup of vodka from me, — he added, so that the soldiers heard. — Thanks to all! Thank God! — and he, overtaking the company, driving to another.

— That’s the same, he, by right, is a good person, with him we can serve, — said Timohin to the subaltern officer walking beside him.

— One word, hearts!... (the regimental commander was nicknamed the king of hearts) — laughing, said the subaltern officer.

The happy location of the spirits of the superiors after review passed to the soldiers. The company became funny. To all parties talked the soldiers.

— How again were we told that Kutuzov is one-eyed, he has one eye?

— Ah that no! Quite one-eyed.

— No... brother, more big-eyed than you. Boots and footcloths — all looked around...

— How he, brother, looked at your and mine legs... Well! Think...

— But that other Austrian that was with him, like in chalk smeared. As flour, white. I am tea, as ammunition is cleaned!

— What, Fedeshou!... he said whether and when the battle will begin? You stood nearer? Said all, in Brno itself Bunaparte himself stays.

— Bunaparte stays! You see a lie, fool! What you don’t know! Now Prussia riots. Austrian means to pacify it. As it will make peace, then with Bunaparte the war will open. But that they say in Brno Bunaparte stays! That is seen, fool. You listen more.

— You’ll see the hell quarters! Fifth company, see, already is in the village wrapped up, their porridge cooked, but we still are before places not reached.

— Give that cracker, damn.

— But that tobacco yesterday given? That, brother. Well, on, God with you.

— Though would’ve halted, but still five versts we pass without eating.

— That was any as the Germans served us carriages. You ride, you know you’re important!

— But here, brother, people went quite frenzied. There were all as if Poles, all the Russian crown; but now, brother, a solid German going.

— Singers forward! — was heard the shout of the captain.

And before the company from different ranks ran out twenty people. The drumming singers turned around to face the singers, and, waving hands, started to sing a long soldier’s song, beginning: “not dawn if the sun is engaged…” and ending with the words: “that, brothers, we will thank with Kamensky father…” This song was constructed in Turkey and sang now in Austria, only with that change that in the place “Kamensky father” inserted the words: “Kutuzov father.”

Tearing soldierly these last words and waving hands, as if he threw something on the ground, drummer, a dry and nice soldier of forty years-old, strictly looking around the soldier singers and squinting. Then, making sure that all eyes were directed on him, he carefully raised both hands with that invisible, precious thing above his head, held it so for a few seconds and suddenly frantically threw it:

Ah, you’re my canopy my canopy!

“My new canopy…”, picked up twenty voices, and tepid, despite the heaviness of the ammunition, quickly jumped out forward and went backwards before the company, stirring shoulders and threatening with spoons. The soldiers, in tact with the song swinging hands, went on a spacious step, unwittingly getting onto one leg. The back of the company heard the sounds of wheels, gnawing springs and clattering horses. Kutuzov with his suite returned to the city. The commander in chief gave a sign, so that people continued to go at ease, and on his face and in the whole face of his suite expressed pleasure at the sounds of songs in seeing the dancing soldier and the funny and smartly going soldier company. In the second a number of, from the right flank, with whom the carriage overtook the company, unwittingly threw an eye at the blue-eyed soldier Dolohov, who especially smartly and gracefully was walking in tact with the songs and saw in the face passing with such an expression, as if he pitied all who were not walking at this time with the company. The hussar cornet from the suite of Kutuzov, mimicking the regimental commander, went behind the carriage and to Dolohov.

Hussar cornet Zherkov at one time in Petersburg belonged to that wild society, which led Dolohov. Abroad Zherkov met Dolohov as a soldier, but did not consider it fit to know him. Now, after Kutuzov’s conversation with the demoted, he with the joy of an old friend turned to him:

— Friend cordially, you are so? — he said in the sound of the song, equal to the step of the horses with the step of the company.

— I am so? — was the response of the cold Dolohov, — So you see.

The brisk song gave special matters to the tone of cheeky fun, with which spoke Zherkov, and the deliberate coldness of the answers of Dolohov.

— Well, how do you get along with superiors? — asked Zherkov.

— Nothing, good people. You wormed your way into the staff?

— Seconded, on duty.

They kept silent.

“Released falcon and from right sleeves,” said the song, unwittingly exciting peppy, fun feelings. Their conversation, probably, would have been different would they have not been speaking the sound of the song.

— What really, are the Austrians beat? — asked Dolohov.

— But damn that they know, they say.

— I am glad, — was the response of Dolohov shortly and it was clear, this was required by the song.

— That is the same, come to us now in the evening, pharoah lay, — said Zherkov.

— Or in money you are much started up?

— Come.

— Cannot be. A vow I gave. Not to pour and not to play, while not promoted.

— Yes that’s the same, before the first affairs...

— There it will be seen.

Again they kept silent.

— You call for, if needed, all on the staff will help... — said Zherkov.

Dolohov grinned.

— You better not worry. What I need, I will not ask, I will take it myself.

— Yes that’s the same, I am so...

— Well, and I am so.

— Goodbye.

— Be healthy...

... and high, and long away,

on darling side...

Zherkov touched the spurs to the horse, which three times, getting hot, interrupted its feet, not knowing, with which to start, managed and jumped, overtaking the company and catching up to the seat, too intact with the song.


Time: See previous chapter.

Locations: See previous chapter. Braunau (also called Brunov or Brunovo in Pevear and Volkhonsky. Brunova in Dole.)
Mentioned: (see Croatians note below) Viennese (Vienna in Garnett), Austrian (also referred to as Austrish or Avstriak in Dole, Austrion in Mandelker), Russia (and Russian), Turkish, Izmail, Poland (also Poles), Prussians (Prusak in Dole. Prooshians in Mandelker.), and Germans.

Pevear and Volkhonsky Notes: Again repeated references to the regimental commander being happy. Everyone shouting, but Kutuzov has a “weak voice”. We also see Kutuzov’s politicking in full force. Timokhin gets some vindication but feels so awkward by it that it turns into a negative thing. Kutuzov’s disfigured face. Tolstoy has some fun with some humorous interludes, but the Dolokhov episode is not unimportant. Again, a chance for vindication. Timokhin also disfigured, missing two teeth that he lost at Izmail, referenced by Kutuozov.
On Dolokhov: “In Poland he all but killed a Jew, if you want to know.”
“The Germans sent us carriages: That is, the Austrians (who, along with other central Europeans, are often referred to by Russian soldiers under the general name of “Germans”). On 13 August 1805, the Russian army began to
march slowly from Radzivilov in the Ukraine; the Austrians also moved slowly, thinking that Napoleon’s army was still in Boulogne. When it was discovered in early September that the French were already on the Rhine, Kutuzov’s
troops were loaded onto wagons and the officers were given carriages to speed up their progress.”
Appropriated the song composed in Turkey to the Austria front with Kutuzov replacing Kamensky.
Dolokhov is really the focus of the chapter. Zherkov’s insincerity, only getting back with Dolokhov because the focus is all on him now. “The brisk song gave a special meaning to the tone of casual merriment with which Zherkov
spoke, and to the intentional coldness of Dolokhov’s replies.”
Dolokhov: “No drinking and no gambling, until I’ve been promoted.”


Characters (characters who do not appear, but are mentioned are placed in italics. First appearances are in Bold. First mentions are underlined. Final appearance denoted by *):

A sentinel (as in Wiener, “the sentinel” in Garnett, “a signalman” in Briggs and Dunnigan “one of the signal men” in Dole and Edmonds (no space in the latter), “one of the outposts” in Bell, “the signaller” in Mandelker and Maude)

The regimental commander (and his horse. Also called “King of Hearts”)

Mikhail Ilarionovitch Kutuzof (“Kutuzof”, “chief”, “highness”, as in Dole, “excellency” in Edmonds, Maude, and Dunnigan)

The Austrian general (Also called “the Avstriak”, as in Dole, “an Austrian” in Garnett, “that Austrian” in Briggs, “the Austrian” in Dunnigan, Bell, and Maude, “that there Austrian” in Edmonds, “Austrish”)

Prince Andrei Bolkonsky

Nesvitsky (as in Dole, Mandelker, and Bell, “Nesvitski” in Wiener)

Zherkof (as in Dole, “Zherkov” in Dunnigan, Edmonds, and Maude, “Gerkow” in Bell, “dark-complexioned”, the Hussar Officer one who keeps making faces. And his horse)

Prokhor Ignatyitch Timokhin (as in Dole. The first usage of his name. “...Ignatych…” in Mandelker and Maude, “...Ignatich…” in Briggs, Wiener, and Dunnigan, “Proho Ignatitch Timohin” in Garnett, “Prohor Ignatich Timohin” in
Edmonds)

Dolokhof

Czar Alexander (just “the emperor” and “his Majesty the Emperor” and “the Tsar”)

Fedeshou (as in Dole, Edmonds, and Garnett. One of the soldiers. “Fedeshov” in Wiener, “Fedeshon” in Mandelker, “Fedya” in Briggs, “Fedeshow” in Dunnigan)

Napoleon Bonaparte (“Bunaparte” in Dole and Wiener, “Buonaparte” in Maude, “Napoleon” in Bell, “Buonapartey” and “Buonaparte” in Mandelker. Briggs, Dunnigan, and Garnett just use “Bonaparte”, not trying to capture the
accents.)

Father Kamensky

The Drummer

Subaltern officer


(plenty of undifferentiated soldiers, in fact, there is a whole conversation by mostly undifferentiated soldiers, and horses, as well as “Kroatians”, as in Dole, “Croatians” in Wiener, “Cossacks” in Bell, “Croats” in Mandelker,
Garnett, and Briggs. Bacchus being a reference to a deity, doesn’t count as a mentioned character)
(there is some disagreement as to who calls the singers to the front. Is it “the captain”, as in, probably, Timokhin, as suggested in Dole, Wiener, and Maude? Is it “an officer” as in Edmonds and Bell?)


Abridged Versions: Bell ends chapter 12 at end.
Gibian: End of chapter 1.
Fuller: Beginning with carriage of Kutuzov pulling up, the chapter follows the same until “and to rest after their hard marches”, which cuts to, without a line break, though the next part starts on a different page “Kutuzov
fell back to Vienna”. This cuts out all the soldier conversations, singing, and Zherkov and Dolokov conversation that colors the second half of the chapter.
Komroff: Some of the regiment description early on is removed. Nevitsky gets cut, as are Zherkov’s shenanigans. Timokhin’s recognition is also removed. This gets us to Dolohov much quicker. Line break before soldier
conversation, which is kept, “king of hearts” reference removed. The conversation is whittled, and the song lyrics are gone. Zherkov and Dolohof conversation is kept.
Kropotkin: starts with Kutuzof’s carriage pulling up. Dolokhof is gotten to much quicker, as Nevitsky’s actions are cut, Zherkov’s shenanigans are cut, as is Timokhin’s recognition. The Dolokhof Kutuzof section is much
shorter and it cuts directly from there to Zherkof and Dolokhof’s conversation, meaning we lose the soldier conversations and song. This ends chapter I.
Bromfield: Chapter II: three thousand men instead of two thousand. After the “footwear had suffered very, very badly.”: “Well, it’s the same song everywhere,” the chief-of-staff said nonchalantly, smiling at the general’s
naivety and thereby indicating that what seemed to the regimental commander to be a peculiar misfortune was the common lot of all the forces who were arriving and it had been foreseen. “You’ll set that to rights here,
if you’re quartered here a while.”
There is also some information about the people following around Kutuzov who do not have the same “fear and respect” the regimental commander has. Bacchus reference is just turned into “He drank.” Emphasis on
Kutuzov speaking in French. Chapter break after Kutuzov leaves Dolokhov.
Chapter III: “yid” instead of “Jew.” Little bit about no extra pay. Slight conversation with Dolokhov and Timokhin, in which Dolokhov calls the regimental commander a “swine.” Everything else plays out the same and
ends chapter III.
Simmons: We get to Dolokhov a little faster because we skip some of the Ismail discussion. The king of hearts section is also removed, getting to the singers much faster. The Zherkov section is also removed. The
snippets of conversation from the soldiers are shortened. The songs themselves are cut, as is the Zherkov riding off to the beat of the song at the end of the chapter. End of chapter 1.


Additional Notes: Maude: “The fortress of Isail on the River Danube was taken by General Suvorov in December 1790 during the Russo-Turkish war of 1787-91. Kutuzov also took part in the battle. It was after this
war that Russia consolidated her position in the Crimea; Tolstoy served as a second lieutenant in the Russian Army during the Crimean War (1854-6)
“Ismail is located in Bessarabia, called Tuchkov in Russian”

Garnett: “Count Mikhail Fyodorovitch Kamensky (1738-1809) was named commander-in-chief of Russian forces, but he held the post for only six days. His serfs killed him when he returned to private life.”

Hosking: Page 197: "General Aleksandr Suvorov, who in the late eighteenth and early nineteenth centuries was credited with not having lost a battle over a period of thirty years. He maintained uncompromising discipline, but
also took great care of the material welfare of his men and did his utmost to get to know them. To the horror of his aides and subordinates, he would turn up unannounced at a regimental bivouac to share a frugal meal
with ordinary soldiers and listen to their accounts of recent fighting. He insisted on regular religious ritual as a way to promote contact between officers and men, as well as to ease for all of them the terrifying unpredictability
of armed combat. Unlike most officers, he allowed his troops to live off the land, knowing that their artels would not allow them to desert or become totally undisciplined. Most important of all, believing that Russian units
were more cohesive than their adversaries, he conducted bolder and more demanding maneuvers than most of his contemporaries thought advisable. That is how he was able to storm and capture two Ottoman fortresses,
Ochakov (1788) and Izmail (1790), previously thought impregnable."

Page 258: "In a very different way, the Jews proved just as difficult to assimilate. With their ancient religion and culture, and a level of literacy and communal cohesion far higher than that of Russians, they usually excelled at
any trade, manufacture, or profession they undertook. On the other hand the great majority of Jews were very poor, as a result of long-standing insecurity and discrimination in Poland. From the outset the government
regarded them with misgiving as likely to outperform Russians and drive them from business. When Moscow merchants petitioned in 1791 to be shielded from Jewish competition, the government issued a decree forbidding
Jews to settle in the capital cities, and then created the Pale of Settlement, to which they were to be confined, in Ukraine, New Russia (the steppe territory to the north of the Black Sea), and the former territories of Poland.
All the same, the imperial regime did try, as with all nationalities, to find some way of integrating Jews. The Jewish Statute of 1804 confirmed their right of self-government in the local commune, or kahal, though insisting it
be separated from the religious establishment, the rabbinate. Jews were allowed to attend Russian schools or to found their own, to open commercial and manufacturing establishments, and to buy or lease land in the Pale.
On the other hand, they were barred from the liquour trade, which had been a (page 259) major source of income for them in Poland, and from military service, instead of which they had to pay a special tax. The Jews' own
poverty, and the suspicion with which they were regarded by much of the population, made it difficult for them to take up many of the opportunities offered, for example by buying land of commercial property. Quite apart from
that they suffered from the imperial government's endemic tendency to proclaim well-designed reforms which it was subsequently unable to deliver. It proved quite alien to Jewish tradition to separate the secular functions of
the kahal from the religious ones of the rabbinate, and so in 1844 the kahal was abolished, though in practice it continued to exist, as Russian substitutes were ineffective."

Fisher: Page 65: Marshal Kamenski had arrived in Pultusk on the night of 21 Decmber (1806) to take command of the Russiann army and ordered an offensive against the strung-out French army. The Russian advance was
blunted at every turn and Kamenski paused to figure out his next move...On Christmas night, Marshal Kamenski ordered a retreat and left the army, apparently suffering a mental breakdown.”




Book 1 Part 2 Chapter 1 (Chapter 27 overall)

Character Summaries: Dole: The Russian army and Kutuzof near Braunau. Preparation for inspection. Condition of the regiments. The regimental commander. A change of orders. Dolokhof cashiered. The blue capote. Captain Timokhin of Company Three.
Briggs (Part II October-November 1805): The Russian army prepares for an inspection at Braunau.
Pevear and Volkhonsky (Chapters 1-2): Kutuzov reviews the troops at Braunau.
Maude (Chapters 1-2): Review near Braunau. Zherkov and Dolokhov.

Translation:

Part the second. I. In October of the year 1805 Russian troops occupied the villages and cities of the Archduke of Austria, and more new regiments came from Russia and, burdening the standing inhabitants, settled down in the fortresses of Braunau. In Braunau was the main apartment of the commander in chief Kutuzov. 11th of October of the year 1805 one of those infantry regiments that had come to Braunau, expecting the review of the commander in chief, stood at half a mile from the city. Despite in non-Russian terrain and decor (fruit gardens, stone walls, tile roofs, mountains, seen in a way not in the Russian people, with curiosity watched the soldiers), the regiment had exactly the same view that any Russian regiment would have, preparing to look somewhere in the middle of Russia. In the evening, at the last transition, was received the order that the commander in chief will look at the regiment on campaign. Although the words of the order seemed unclear to the regimental commander, and sprang up the question as to how to understand the words of the order: in campaign shape or not? — At the advice of the battalion commanders it was decided to represent the regiment in parade shape on the foundation that it is always better to bow than not to bow down. And the soldiers, after thirty transitions, did not close their eyes all night and were repaired, were cleaned; adjutants and the company calculated, deducted; and to morning the regiment, instead of an extended disordered crowd, which it was on the eve on the last transition, submitted as a slender mass of 2000 people, of which everyone knew their place, their business, of which each button and strap were in its location and shone with cleanliness. Not only was the outside in good order, but should the commander in chief have looked under the uniforms, that on each he would have seen an equally blank shirt and in each knapsack would have found the legal number of things, “needle and soap”, as spoke soldiers. There was only one circumstance about which no one could be calm. This was the footwear. More than half of the people’s boots were smashed. Yet this lacking occurred not from the guilt of the regimental commander, as, despite the repeated demands, he was not released the product from the Austrian authorities, but the regiment had passed a thousand versts. The regimental commander was an elderly, sanguine, with graying eyebrows and whiskers general, more dense and broad from breast to back, than from one shoulder to another. On him everything was new, from the needles, to the cramped folds of his uniform and the thick gold epaulettes which as if not down, but raised up by his fat shoulders. The regimental commander had the view of a man happily committing one of the most solemn cases of life. He laughed before the front and, walking back and forth, trembling in each step, a little curving in the back. It was seen that the regimental commander admired his regiment, was happy with them, and that all of the forces of his soul was busy only in the regiment; but, despite this, his trembling gait said that, besides military interests, in his soul a considerable place was occupied in the interests of public life and the female sex. — Well, father Mihayl Mitrich, — he turned to one battalion commander (the battalion commander with a smile served forward; it seemed that he was happy), — it got nuts at night. However, it seems, nothing from the regiment is bad...Ah? The battalion commander got it as fun irony and bursted out laughing. — And on Tsaritsa’s Meadow with the field they would not be driven away. — What? — said the commander. At this time by the road from the city, by which were placed signallers, were seen two riders. These were an adjutant and a Cossack, riding back. The adjutant was sent from the main staff to confirm to the regimental commander that what was said was not clear in yesterday’s order, but that the commander in chief desired to see the regiment completely in this position in which they were walking — in greatcoats, in covers and without all preparations. To Kutuzov on the eve arrived a member of the Hofkriegsrat from Vienna, with offers and requirements as to going into a combination with the army of Archduke Ferdinand and Mack, and Kutuzov, not considering profitable this combination, in the number of evidence in favor of his opinion contemplated to show the Austrian general that sad position in which came the troops from Russia. With this purpose he wanted to leave towards the regiment, so that the worse the position of the regiment, the more pleasant that would be for the commander in chief. Although the adjutant did not know these details, he delivered to the regimental commander the indispensable demand of the commander in chief, so that the people were in greatcoats and covers, and that if otherwise was the case the commander in chief will be displeased. Listening to these words, the regimental commander lowered his head, silently lifted his shoulders and with a sanguine gesture spread his hands. — Done affairs! — he said. — Here I spoke the same to you, Mihayl Mitrich, that in a campaign, so in greycoats, — he turned with reproach to the battalion commander. — Ah, my God! — he added and resolutely came forward. — Gentleman company commanders! — he shouted in a voice habitual to commanding. — Sergeants!... if they are coming soon? — he turned to the coming adjutant with an expression of respectful courtesy, apparently related to the face, about whom he spoke. — In an hour, I think. — Do we have time to change clothes? — I don’t know, general... The regimental commander, himself coming up to the rows, ordered a change of clothes again into greatcoats. The company commanders fled by the company, the sergeants fussed (the greatcoats were not really serviceable) and at that same moment swayed, stretched out and speaking in a buzz before the regular, silent quadrangles. All parties ran back and ran up to soldiers, threw back their shoulders, across the head dragged backpacks, removed greatcoats and, highly raising their hands, pulled at their sleeves. In half an hour all again had come to its former order, only the quadrangles were gray from black. The regimental commander, again with a trembling gait, got out in front of the regiment and from afar looked around him. — What more? What is this! — he screamed, stopping. — Commander of the 3rd company!... — Commander of the 3rd company to the general! Commander to general, 3rd company to the commander!... — heard the voice by the rows, and the adjutant ran looking for the hesitating officer. When the sounds of the zealous voice, turning over, shouted now “General of the 3rd company,” reached by appointment, the required officer was seen from behind the company and, although a person already elderly and not having a habit of running, awkwardly clinging toes, trotted directly to the general. The face of the captain expressed the anxiety of a schoolboy who is being told to say an unlearned lesson. In a red (obviously from incontinence) face came forward spots, and his mouth did not find the situation. The regimental commander with his feet before his head examined the captain, at that time as he approached out of breath at least by approximation holding back steps. — You’ll soon dress up people in sundresses! What is this? — shouted the regimental commander, putting forward his lower jaw and pointing to the ranks of the 3rd company at a soldier in greatcoats the colors of a factory cloth, distinguished from the other overcoats — Where have they found out? Awaiting the commander in chief, but you walk away from your places? Ah?... I will teach you how in a review of people in Cossack dress!... Ah?... The company commander, not lowering his eyes from the chief, all the more and more pressed his two fingertips to his visor, as if in this same pressing he saw now his salvation. — Well, for what are you keeping silent? Who do you have there in Hungarian dress? — strictly joked the regimental commander. — Your excellency... — Well, what is “your excellency”? Your excellency! Your excellency! But what is your excellency — nobody knows. — Your excellency, this is Dolohov, demoted... — said the quiet captain. — For what is he in field marshals, what if he is demoted or in the soldiers? But a soldier, so should he be dressed, as all, by form. — Your excellency, you yourself allowed him in the campaign. — Allowed? Allowed? Here you are always so, young people, — said the regimental commander, cooling down some. — Allowed? You are someone to say, but you and... — the regimental commander was silent. — You are someone to say, but you and... — What? — he said, again annoyed. — Kindly dress people decently... And the regimental commander, looking back at the adjutant, his trembling gait directed to the regiment. It was seen that his irritation he most liked, and that he, walking by the regiment, wanted to find more pretext for his anger. Breaking off one officer for an unprotected sign, another for a row irregularity, he came up to the 3rd company. — Hhh-ooo-ww are you standing? Where is your leg? Where is your leg? — shouted the regimental commander with an expression of misery in his voice, still for five people had not reached to Dolohov, dressed in a bluish overcoat Dolohov slowly straightened his bent leg and with all of his bright and insolent look, looked at the face of the General. — What is the blue overcoat for? Down with it!... Sergeant major! Change his clothes... Sh... — he did not have time to finish. — General, I must perform orders, yet I must not carry across... — hastily said Dolohov. — In the front there is no speaking!...No speaking, no speaking!... — I must not carry across insults, — loudly, and sonorously Dolohov finished talking. The eyes of the General and the soldier met. The general fell silent, angrily pulling down his tight scarf. — Kindly change clothes, I beg you, — he said, walking away.

Time: October 11, 1805 (twenty-third of October in Dole), the half-hour it took for the soldiers to re-dress and the hour in the future that Kutuzov will arrive.
Mentioned: the previous evening.

Locations: the villages and towns of the Archduchy of Austria, Braunau (within half a league from the city, half a mile from the town in Maude, Dunnigan, and Mandelker.)
Mentioned: Russia, Tsaritsyn Field (Champ de Mars in Bell, Empress's Field in Dole), Vienna.

Pevear and Volkhonsky Notes: Start of Part Two:
October 1805, Russian troops occupying Austria.
Fortress of Braunau…”burdening the local inhabitants with their billeting.”
The review
“The regiment looked exactly the same as any Russian regiment”, but an emphasis on the foreignness of the setting.
The unclearness of the order.
“It is always better to bow too much than not to bow enough.”
“A twenty-mile march, without a wink of sleep”
“Each of whom knew his place, his duty”
Of course the falling apart of the footwear.
“The regiment had walked seven hundred miles.” Sort of a mini-hint of the large march the French make toward the end of the novel.
“It was clear that the regimental commander admired his regiment, was happy with it, and that all his inner forces were taken up only with the regiment...no small part of his soul was taken up by the interests of social life and the female
sex.” Cf. the misogyny of the Andrei plot-line of Part I
“Hofkriegsrath”, the council Nikolai Bolkonsky made fun of.
Kutuzov wants to show the Austrians how bad the regiment looks. Even though the regiment looks pretty good, only being tired and having worn-out boots.
Everyone starts yelling and distorting the order to “the general to the third company”
(the regimental commander) “It was clear that he liked his own irritation and that he wanted to walk the length of the regiment and find more pretexts for his wrath.”


Translations on dates: Pevear and Volkhonskye and Dunnigan: eleventh of October, “October 11” in Wiener, “October 11th” in Maude and Mandelker, “11th of October” in Bell, Garnett, Briggs (with an endnote: “Until 1918 Russia used
the Julian Calendar, as opposed to the Gregorian Calendar universally accepted today. At this period Julian (or ‘Old Style’) dates lagged behind Gregorian (or ‘New Style’) dates by a difference of twelve days. The dates used
throughout War and Peace are predominantly Old Style”) and Edmonds, Dole: twenty-third of October


Characters (characters who do not appear, but are mentioned are placed in italics. First appearances are in Bold. First mentions are underlined. Final appearance denoted by *):
Mikhail Ilarionovitch Kutuzof (“Kutuzof”, “general-in-chief”, and “commander-in-chief”)
The regimental commander (as in Dole, Maude, and Dunnigan, “commanding officer” in Edmonds, “general in command of the regiment” in Garnett, called “excellency” by Dolokhof)
Mikhailo Mitritch (as in Dole, “Mikhail Mitrich” in Dunnigan, Briggs, and Mandelker, “Michael Mitrich” in Maude. A major)
An adjutant (no reason to believe this is one of the other adjutants previously mentioned in the book)
A Cossack
Archduke Ferdinand
General Mack (as in Dole and Briggs. Garnett, Wiener, and Mandelker just have “Mack”)
Prokhor Ignatyitch Timokhin (just “Captain of the third company" as in Dole, Briggs, and Bell, “...3rd…” in Edmonds, “Third company commander” in Dunnigan, “commander of the third company” in Maude. Called for and dressed
down by the regimental commander)
Dolokhov


(two thousand unnamed soldiers, an undifferentiated “council of officers” in Dole, “a consultation between the battalion commanders” in Mandelker, Maude, and Edmonds, “consultation with the battalion commanders” in Briggs,
“consultation of battalion commanders” in Dunnigan, “a consultation between the majors” in Garnett, “council of commanders of the battalion” in Wiener, “little council of officers” in Bell. Also, “aids and captains” and “sergeants” and
some officers that the regimental commander yells at for different reasons but don’t have reactions enough to be considered characters)


(there is also “Austrian commissariat” as in Dole, Edmonds, and Mandelker, “Austrian authorities” in Briggs and Garnett, “Austrian government” in Wiener, “the commissariat” in Bell)


Abridged Versions: start of Part Second in Dole. Part Two in Edmonds, Mandelker, Garnett, and Dunnigan. Part II in Briggs. Book Two in Maude
No chapter break at the end for Bell.
Gibian: Start of Book Two. Line break at end.
Fuller: Part Two: Only the first two paragraphs are preserved, cut, with no line break from “the commander-in-chief would inspect the regiment” to “A high, blue Vienna coach with several horses…”
Komroff: Book Two: A lot of the description of the uniforms and the set up of the military is removed, though we still get a lot of the description of the commander of the regiment. The Tsaritsuin Lug reference is unsurprisingly removed.
Some of the description of the soldiers changing their uniforms is removed, but the kernel is definitely kept. The captain of the third company is much more easily gotten. The Dolohov section is still there, but the regimental commander
finding others to yell at is removed.
Kropotkin: “1805
The young Tsar Alexander I, ruler of Russia since the assassination of his father, the mad Tsar Paul, in 1801, has taken the lead in the movement to stop Napoleon. His allies will be weak Emperor Francis of the dying Holy Roman
Empire; King Gustavus of Sweden, whose insanity (for which he is to be deposed a few years later) is expresses principally in fear of revolution and hatred of the French; and, of course, Britain, whose war with Napoleon continues.
Just as the land campaign is beginning, in October, 1805, Lord Nelson’s victory over the French fleet at Trafalgar frees Britain from the threat of invasion. Napoleon invades Austria, and a Russian force under General Kutuzof (now
sixty, an old man for those times) moves southward to the assistance of its ally.
Part Second”
Makes same drastic cutting choice as Fuller.
Bromfield: Part Two: 8th of October. Addition to description about the familiarity in the unfamiliar: “the familiar strings of carts behind the ranks, and the more familiar, even too-familiar, figures of their superiors ahead of the ranks and,
up further ahead, the tethering-posts of the Uhlan Regiment and the artillery batteries that had travelled with them throughout the campaign.”
Everything else is the same
Simmons: Start of Book Two. The re-dressing episode is basically removed, though the rest of the chapter is retained.


Additional Notes:
Garnett: “The narrator is referring to the commanders of the Austrian army at Ulm, Archduke Ferdinand Karl-Joseph (1781-1850) and Baron Karl Mack von Leiberich (1752-1828)”


Norton Critical Edition chart:
Dates of Principal Historical Events
Old Style      New Style
Oct. 11 Oct. 23 Kutuzov inspects regiment near Braunau. Le malheureux Mack arrives.
Oct. 23 Nov. 4 The Russian army crosses the Enns
Oct. 24 Nov. 5 Fight at Amstetten
Oct. 28 Nov. 9 The Russian army crosses the Danube
Oct. 30 Nov. 11 Defeats Mortier at Durrenstein
Nov. 4 Nov. 16 Napoleon writes to Murat from Schonbrunn
Nov. 4 Nov. 16 Battle of Schon Grabern

Troyat/Pinkham: Page 86: Ill fed, lacking warm clothes and boots, the men had only one thought: to plunder the neighboring villages. Discipline was lax. Fights broke out between Russians and Austrians.”

Roberts: Page 80: “An astonishing number of his (Napoleon) letters throughout his career refer to providing footwear for his troops.”

Fremont-Barnes Page 58: "General Mack's strong recommendation that the army not mobilise until absolutely ready so as to avoid provoking a French military response failed to account for the fact that the troops in and around Boulogne already stood on a war footing, and thus could be on the move the moment they received orders from the emperor accordingly...According to Mack's calculations, the French could not engage Austrian forces in Bavaria in few than sixty-eight days, whereas he estimated the arrival of Kutuzov at Braunau to occur in under sixty-five. These calculations proved faulty, reflecting an inaccurate understanding of the speed of movement of troops over poor roads and a failure to appreciate the French Army's superior speed of march over all its (page 59) rivals. Not only, therefore, did Mack persuade Emperor Francis of these figures' accuracy, but when the former issued orders for his army to proceed towards Bavaria, unbeknownst to him Napoleon's troops had left their camps along the coast more than a week earlier...Mack's plan to speed his advance by mimicking the French tradition of 'living off the land' proved a dismal failure, for the Austrians possessed no experience of foraging on this scale, as a consequence of which many men found themselves deprived of sufficient food, the advance made poor progress and discipline suffered."

Book 1 Part 2 Character Index

Prince Andrei Bolkonsky: Chapters 2, 3, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 15, 16, 17, 18, 20 (and his wounded horse. Also Kutuzof’s “adjutant”, he’s also called “Mr. Adjutant”, "the officer", “courier”, and “Euer Hochgeboren”, which Bell translates in parenthesis as “High born Sir”)

Zherkof: Chapters 2, 3, 5, 8, 17, 19, 21 (as in Dole. The Hussar Officer one who keeps making faces. “Zherkov” in Dunnigan, Edmonds, and Maude. “Gerkow” in Bell. “dark-complexioned”. And his horse)

Prince Nesvitsky: Chapters 2, 3, 6, 7, 8, 13 (as in Dole, Mandelker, and Bell. “Nesvitski” in Wiener. Also spelled “Nezvitsky" by Dole. And his horse, called a “Bedouin”. The Cossack refers to him as “general”. “on his Cossack’s horse” and called “Mister Staff Officer” by Schubert)

Prince Bagration: Chapters 13, 15, 17, 18, 21 Mentioned: Chapters 8, 14, 16, 19, 20 (also "the general” and “your illustriousness”)

Captain Vaska Denisof: Chapters 4, 5, 7, 8, 19 Mentioned: Chapter 21 (“...Denisov” in Garnett, Wiener, and Edmonds. Also “Vaska Denisof”, as in Dole, is what he is known as. “Vaska Denissow” in Bell. Dunnigan, Mandelker, and Briggs also use Vaska. Rostof calls him “the barin” in Dole. “master” in Bell, Mandelker, and Dunnigan. Significantly called “youngster” and then “Count” by Telyanin. Also called “Vasya” by Nesvitsky in Dole and Wiener. And his Bedouin)

An officer on duty: Chapters 15, 17, 18, 20, 21 Mentioned: Chapter 16 (as in Dole, Mandelker, and Bell (the latter two use “the” instead of “an”). “handsome”, “with a diamond ring”, and accompanies Andrei for a part of the chapter. “The detachment officer of the day” in Wiener. Also referred to as “the staff officer” and "colonel")

Captain Tushin: Chapters 15, 16, 17, 20, 21 Mentioned: Chapter 19 (“the artillery officer”. Called “Tonshine” in Bell. Also, “artilleryman” and “little Tushin”)

Nikolai Rostof: Chapters 4, 5, 8, 19, 21 (also “yunker…” in Dole and Wiener, “Cadet…” in Dunnigan, Maude, and Mandelker. “Ensign…” in Briggs. Bell doesn’t put this extra title but translates it “junker”. Called “illustriousness” by the hussar. Also called “your illustriousness” and “count” while being berated)

Mikhail Ilarionovitch Kutuzof: Chapters 2, 3, 6, 13 Mentioned: Chapters 1, 9, 10, 12, 14, 15, 16, 17, 21 (“Kutuzof”, “general-in-chief”, and “commander-in-chief”. “Kutuzof”, “chief”, “highness”, as in Dole. “excellency” in Edmonds, Maude, and Dunnigan. Also “commander-in-chief” and called “General Field Marshal Kutuzof“ in Dole, Dunnigan, and Maude (with an extra hypen by the minister of war). “General Prince…” in Bell. “Field-Marshal…” in Wiener.)

Dolokhov: Chapters 1, 2, 15, 20 Mentioned: Chapters 19, 21

The regimental commander: Chapters 1, 2, 19 Mentioned: Chapter 17 (as in Dole, Maude, and Dunnigan, “commanding officer” in Edmonds, “general in command of the regiment” in Garnett, called “excellency” by Dolokhof. Also called “King of Hearts”, “the old general”, or “senior general”, as in Edmonds, here, "infantry general")

Bilibin: Chapters 10, 11, 12, Mentioned: Chapter 13 (“Bilibine” in Bell, who offers an alternative reading)

Prokhor Ignatyitch Timokhin: Chapters 1, 2, 20 (just “Captain of the third company as in Dole, Briggs, and Bell, “...3rd…” in Edmonds, “Third company commander” in Dunnigan, “commander of the third company” in Maude. Called for and dressed down by the regimental commander. “...Ignatych…” in Mandelker and Maude, “...Ignatich…” in Briggs, Wiener, and Dunnigan, “Proho Ignatitch Timohin” in Garnett, “Prohor Ignatich Timohin” in Edmonds)

Grachik: Chapters 4, 8, 19 (or “Young Rook”, Dole using both. The horse Rostov purchased. “Rook” in Dunnigan, Maude, and Mandelker. “Little Rook” in Briggs and “Little Crow” in Bell.)

An infantry officer: Chapter 16, 18, 21 (who interrupts Tushin and the younger man’s conversation. Also "company commander")

Gunner number one: Chapter 17, 20, 21 (in Dole and Garnett. “a huge soldier with broad shoulders.” “Number One” in Dunnigan, Mandelker, and Maude. “Number one gunner” in Briggs. “Soldier number one” in Wiener. “Gunner No. 1” in Bell. "his favourite gunner" in Dole)

Bogdanuitch: Chapters 8, 19 Mentioned: Chapters 5, 20, 21 (as in Dole. “Bogdanich” in Mandelker, Maude, and Edmonds. “Bogdanynch” in Briggs and Dunnigan. “regimental commander”, but shouldn't be confused with the previous regimental commander, as this is a different regiment. Also "Colonel", "colonel of cavalry", and "colonel of hussars")

Minister of war: Chapters 9, 12 Mentioned: Chapter 10, 11, 13

The Austrian general: Chapters 1, 3 Mentioned: Chapter 5 (Also called “the Avstriak”, as in Dole, “an Austrian” in Garnett, “that Austrian” in Briggs, “the Austrian” in Dunnigan, Bell, and Maude, “that there Austrian” in Edmonds, “Austrish”)

Flugel-adjutant: Chapters 9, 12 Mentioned: Chapter 11 (as in Dole. “aide-de-camp” in Dunnigan. “Duty adjutant” in Briggs. “Adjutant on duty” in Mandelker. There seems to be confusion as to whether the adjutant being “on duty” is part of the title. Dunnigan and Dole do not interpret it as part of the person’s title, while Briggs, Garnett, Edmonds, and Mandelker do. Also "yesterday's adjutant.")

Kozlovsky: Chapters 3, 13 (as in Dole, Dunnigan, and Mandelker. “Kozlovski” in Wiener. An adjutant, one of Prince Andrei’s “colleagues”)

Captain Kirsten: Chapters 5, 8 (as in Dole, Garnett, and Wiener. “Kirstein” in Bell. “the second captain” and his “steady-going mare”, as in Dole)

A Cossack: Chapters 6, 7 (“accompanying” (as in Dole, Dunnigan, and Wiener, though they use different tenses) or “serving” (Bell) Nesvitsky. And his horse)

Officer of his suite: Chapters 6, 8 (as in Dole, Dunnigan, and Wiener. “one of his staff officers” in Briggs, “a staff-officer” in Maude and Bell (the latter not using the hyphen, but a space instead), “an officer of his staff” in Edmonds)

Franz: Chapters 10, 12 (“the valet who had admitted the visitor” in Dole.)

The prince’s personal adjutant: Chapters 17, 18 (as in Dole. “Bagration’s personal aide” in Briggs. Garnett uses the word “private” instead of “personal”, but otherwise see previous chapters for “adjutant” versus “aide” etc in translations. Part of Bagration’s suite.)

Auditor: Chapters 17, 21 (“civil chinovnik serving as auditor” in Dole. “a civilian--an accountant” in Mandelker. “Civilian official--an auditor” in Edmonds, Garnett (comma and “the” instead of “an”) and Dunnigan (using a comma). “Civil servant, an auditor” in Briggs.)

General Mack: Chapter 3 Mentioned: Chapters 1, 4, 5, 9, 10, 12, 13, 14 (as in Dole and Briggs, Garnett, Wiener, and Mandelker just have “Mack”. When he arrives, is “the unknown general” temporarily)

Lieutenant Telyanin: Chapter 4 Mentioned: Chapters 5, 8, 21 (as in Dole, Briggs, and Mandelker. “The quartermaster” (Dole, Bell, who puts a hyphen in it, and Edmonds) or “the squadron quartermaster” (Maude and Mandelker), “the sergeant” in Garnett, “the sergeant-major” in Wiener. As “worthless scamp” (to take a quote from Dole) and “scoundrel” (to take a quote from Wiener. Also spelled "Telyagin" by Dole))

Emperor Franz: Chapter 12 Mentioned: Chapters 9, 11 (called “his majesty” by the minister of war)

The general in command of the rearguard: Chapter 6 Mentioned: Chapter 8 (as in Dole, Mandelker, and Garnett (the latter hyphenating “rearguard”). Called “excellency” by Nesvitsky)

Mikhailo Mitritch: Chapter 1 (as in Dole, “Mikhail Mitrich” in Dunnigan, Briggs, and Mandelker, “Michael Mitrich” in Maude. A major)

An adjutant: Chapter 1 (no reason to believe this is one of the other adjutants previously mentioned in the book)

A Cossack: Chapter 1

A sentinel: Chapter 2 (as in Wiener, “the sentinel” in Garnett, “a signalman” in Briggs and Dunnigan, “one of the signal men” in Dole and Edmonds (no space in the latter), “one of the outposts” in Bell, “the signaller” in Mandelker and Maude)

Fedeshou: Chapter 2 (as in Dole, Edmonds, and Garnett. One of the soldiers. “Fedeshov” in Wiener, “Fedeshon” in Mandelker, “Fedya” in Briggs, “Fedeshow” in Dunnigan)

The Drummer: Chapter 2

Subaltern Officer: Chapter 2

Strauch: Chapter 3 (an Austrian General in the Hofkriegsrath, attached to Kutuzof’s staff.)

Bondarenko: Chapter 4 (a hussar who attends to the horse. “The little Russian” in Dole, who footnotes, “a nickname of the Malo-Russians.” “A native of Little Russia” in Bell. “Ukrainian” in Dunnigan, Mandelker, and Briggs)

Another Hussar: Chapter 4 (too late to attend to the horse)

The German who owned the house: Chapter 4

Lavrushka: Chapter 4 (as in Dole, Maude, and Briggs. I am not counting how Denisof mispronounces names due to his speech impediment. Lavrushka is Denisof’s “rascally valet”, as in Dole, “orderly...rogue” in Maude, Dunnigan, and Edmonds. “Valet...rogue” in Garnett. “Lackey...rogue” in Wiener.)

Telyanin’s man: Chapter 4 (as in Dole. “orderly” in Garnett, Wiener, and Edmonds.)

Regimental Adjutant: Chapter 5

Soldier driving a baggage wagon: Chapter 7  (as in Dole and Dunnigan, “in charge of a waggon-load” in Garnett, “a driver...his wagon” in Briggs, “convoy-soldier with a wagon” in Mandelker, Maude, and Edmonds (no hypen). The Cossack calls him “boy” in Dole, Edmonds, and Briggs, “friend” in Wiener, “there” in Bell, “lad” in Garnett and Dunnigan, “Brother” in Mandelker)

jolly soldier in a torn overcoat: Chapter 7 (as in Dole. “.....coat” in Dunnigan. “merry….” in Wiener. “Wag in the ranks” in Bell. “Cheerful soldier in a torn coat” in Garnett. “Soldier in a torn coat...cheerfully” in Briggs. “Waggish soldier in a torn coat” in Mandelker and Maude. “Cheerful soldier in a torn great-coat” in Edmonds.)

Old Tambof soldier: Chapter 7 (as in Dole, no reference to “Tambof” in Wiener, Bell, or Garnett.)

Soldier riding on a baggage wagon: Chapter 7 (as in Dole. Briggs and Dunnigan omit “baggage.” “sitting on a cart” in Mandelker, Maude, and Edmonds.)

A denshchik: Chapter 7 (as in Dole. “Officer’s servant” in Wiener, “military servant” in Bell. “Orderly” in Garnett, Mandelker, and Briggs.)

Soldier who wore the collar of his overcoat turned up: Chapter 7 (as in Dole. The one who mentions the hitting of the gun into the teeth. “His greatcoat well tucked up” in Dunnigan, Mandelker, and Maude, “tucked-up greatcoat” in Briggs, and “his greatcoat tucked up round his waist” in Edmonds. “His coat pulled out over his belt” in Wiener. “His hood was up” in Bell. Garnett just cuts the detail)

The other: Chapter 7 (as in Dole, Bell, and Garnett. “Another” in Wiener. “Another one” in Briggs)

A non-commissioned officer: Chapter 7 (as in Dole and Dunnigan (no hyphen in the latter). “NCO” in Briggs. “A sergeant” in Mandelker, Maude, and Edmonds. “Under-officer” in Wiener. “Sub-altern” in Bell)

A young soldier with a monstrous mouth: Chapter 7 (as in Dole. “....enormous…” in Wiener, Dunnigan, and Mandelker. “....huge…” in Garnett and Briggs. Mouth detail omitted in Bell.)

A German: Chapter 7 (driving the Vorspann with the “handsome brindled cow, with an enormous udder”, as in Dole. Maude just calls the Vorspann a “cart”.)

Woman: Chapter 7

Baby: Chapter 7 (or “babe” as in Wiener.)

Old granny: Chapter 7 (as in Dole and Edmonds, “older woman” in Briggs, “old woman” in Mandelker, Maude, and Dunnigan)

Young healthy-looking German girl: Chapter 7 (as in Dole, Edmonds (omitting “looking”), and Wiener, “with flaming red cheeks.” Just “handsome, rosy-cheeked” in Bell, Garnett being the same, other than using “good-looking”. “Young, rather pretty” in Briggs. “Healthy” with no emphasis on attractiveness or youth in Mandelker and Dunnigan.)

Another soldier: Chapter 7 (who wants to have the “little woman” sold to him.)

Fyedotof: Chapter 7 (as in Dole. “Fedotow” in Bell. “Fedotov” in Garnett, Mandelker, and Briggs.)

An infantry officer: Chapter 7 (the one eating the apple.)

The colonel: Chapter 7 (that Nesvitsky was supposed to deliver the message to)

A hussar: Chapter 7

Infantry-man: Chapter 7 (as in Dole. No hyphen in Briggs, Dunnigan and Mandelker. Verbally spars with the hussar)

Zikin: Chapter 7 (a “little soldier” who seems to be having a hard time carrying his “knapsack.”)

Mironof: Chapter 8 (as in Dole. “Mironov” in Wiener, Briggs, and Edmonds, “Mironow” in Bell. A “yunker”)

A Russian Officer: Chapter 9 (in Dole, Dunnigan, and Wiener (the last two choosing “the”), “the officer in command” in Bell.)

The driver: Chapter 9 (or “his driver”, as in Andrei’s)

An official: Chapter 9 (who sends Andrei to another entrance.)

Prince Ippolit Kuragin: Chapter 11 (also with the nickname "Don Juan")

Empress’s chamberlain: Chapter 12 (as in Dole, Garnett, and Bell. “chamberlain of the empress” in Wiener.)

Russian ambassador: Chapter 12

Cossack: Chapter 13 (the one Andrei takes with him when he gets a horse)

The head of the Cossack division: Chapter 13 (as in Dole. “the chief of the Cossacks” in Wiener. “The captain of the Cossacks” in Bell. “the officer in command of the Cossacks” in Edmonds and Garnett. “A Cossack commander” in Dunnigan, Mandelker, and Maude. “The officer in charge of the Cossacks” in Briggs.)

Woman: Chapter 13 (“all wrapped up in shawls” as in Dole. The wife of the doctor who is whipped. Called a slut by the officer in Wiener and Dunnigan)

Officer: Chapter 13 (the one who is beating the man)

Doctor: Chapter 13 (the man who is being beaten. He is the doctor of the “Seventh Jagers” in Dole. “surgeon of the seventh of chasseurs” in Wiener. “The doctor of the 7th chasseurs” in Bell, Dunnigan (who spells out “seventh”) and Edmonds.)

The other adjutant: Chapter 13 (the one with Nesvitsky)

Weirother: Chapter 13 (as in Dole, as is: “the Austrian general who had succeeded to the place of the Schmidt who had been killed,” further supporting the idea that Schmidt is the unnamed Austrian general. “Weyrother” in Maude, Wiener, and Mandelker. “Weierother” in Garnett and Briggs.)

The clerk: Chapter 13 (who is writing Kozlovsky's dictated letter.)

Kaptenarmus: Chapter 15 (“or sergeant” in Dole. Carries a wooden cupful of dinner. “Quarter-master sergeant” in Edmonds, Briggs, and Dunnigan (does not use hyphen).

The man who was undergoing the punishment: Chapter 15 (as in Dole. just “the man” in Maude, Dunnigan, and Mandelker. “The punished man” in Wiener. “The victim” in Bell and Edmonds.)

A stout major: Chapter 15 (who berates the man being punished)

A young officer: Chapter 15 (who turns away and looks at Andrei.)

Sidorof: Chapter 15 (as in Dole. “Sidorov” in Wiener, Edmonds, and Mandelker. “Siderow” in Bell.)

Soldier: Chapter 15 (who speaks with Sidorof)

Ivan Lukitch: Chapter 15 (as in Dole. “Ivan Lukich” in Wiener, Edmonds, and Mandelker. “Ivan Loukitch” in Bell. Dolokhof’s captain)

French grenadier: Chapter 15 (with whom Dolokhof speaks. Also, “The Frenchman.”)

Another Frenchman: Chapter 15 (that joins the argument)

Sentry: Chapter 16 (as in Dole. “artillerist, doing sentinel duty” in Wiener. “Man on guard” in Bell. “artillery sentry” in Maude, Mandelker, and Dunnigan. “Artilleryman on sentry duty” in Briggs. “Artilleryman on sentinel duty” in Garnett and Edmonds.)

A younger man: Chapter 16 (talking with Tushin. Just “a younger voice” in Bell, Maude, and Wiener.)

An attache: Chapter 17 (as in Dole. “an officer of the suite” in Mandelker, Dunnigan, and Edmonds. Part of Bagration’s suite.)

An Orderly: Chapter 17 (part of Bagration’s suite.)

A Cossack: Chapter 17 (who dies)

Gunner: Chapter 17 (of Tushin’s company. “Freckled, red-headed.” Speaks to Bagration. Maude, Edmonds, and Mandelker also call him an “artilleryman”. “Cannoneer” in Wiener.)

Medvyedef: Chapter 17 (in Dole. “Medvedev” in Edmonds, Briggs, and Dunnigan. also “Number Two”)

An adjutant: Chapter 17 (who does all the messaging toward the end of the chapter)

Regimental commander: Chapter 18

Aide: Chapter 19 (whom Bogdanuitch speaks to)

Nikitenko: Chapter 19 (as in Dole, Mandelker, and Edmonds. “Nikolenko” in Dunnigan. “Nikitenka” in Bell. “a hussar”)

Bandarchuk: Chapter 19 (as in Dole, Briggs, and Wiener. “Bondarchuk” in Maude. “a hussar.” Name removed in Bell.)

Soldier: Chapter 20 (who cries “Cut off!”)

Major Ekonomof: Chapter 20 (as in Dole. “...Ekonomov” in Wiener, Garnett, and Maude. “...Ekonomow” in Bell.)

The powder-master: Chapter 20 (as in Dole, who loses a leg. “Munition-wagon driver” in Mandelker, Dunnigan (who pluralizes “munition”), and Maude. “Caisson driver” in Wiener. “A gunner” in Bell and Garnett (who varies from other translations in having him only losing a foot). “Wagon driver” in Briggs.)

An officer, Tushin’s comrade: Chapter 20 (as in Dole. “.....companion” in Wiener. “Tushin’s companion officer” in Mandelker, Edmonds, and Maude. “The officer second in command to Tonschine” in Bell. “The other officer, Tushin’s comrade” in Garnett. “One of Tushin’s fellow officers” in Briggs. “Another officer, Tushin’s comrade” in Dunnigan.)

A gunner: Chapter 20 (who asks Tushin for orders. “An artilleryman” in Edmonds, Maude (who uses a hyphen), and Mandelker. “A cannoneer” in Wiener. “Man by his side” in Bell. May or may not be the same gunner who talks to Andrei later in the chapter)

Captured colonel of dragoons: Chapter 21 (as in Dole. “French colonel” in Maude, Garnett, and Briggs)

Characters Mentioned But Do Not Appear:

Napoleon Bonaparte: Chapters 2, 3, 9, 10, 12, 13, 14, 15, 17, 18 (“Bunaparte” in Dole and Wiener, “Buonaparte” in Maude, “Napoleon” in Bell, “Buonapartey” and “Buonaparte” in Mandelker. Briggs, Dunnigan, and Garnett just use “Bonaparte”, not trying to capture the accents. just “Bonaparte” or, as Maude uses, “Buonaparte” and Prince Andrei’s “hero” also “Emperor…” or “Sovereign Emperor”)

Czar Alexander: Chapters 2, 3, 4, 10, 11, 14 (“the emperor”, “his Majesty the Emperor” and “the Tsar” or “Czar”, as in Bell. Also in German, “Kaiser Alexander” and also “his most august majesty.)

Prince Murat: Chapters 10, 12, 14, 15, 17 (gets the prefix “Marshal” in Bell and Dunnigan. “Messrs. Marshal” in Dole. “Messieurs les Marechaux” in Garnett, Edmonds, and Mandelker. Also called “Gascons”)

Austrian General Schmidt: Chapters 9, 10, 12, 13

Archduke Ferdinand: Chapters 1, 3, 10 (described as “commander of the army of the van” in Dole)

Emperor Franz: Chapters 3, 10, 13 (as in Dole. “...Francis” in Briggs, Edmonds, and Maude. Also “his majesty.", "King Franz", and "emperor")

Suvarof: Chapters 3, 15, 17 (also “Souvara” as called by The Frenchman.)

Lemarrois: Chapter 14, 15, 17 ("Napoleon's aide." as in Dole. “The aide-de-camp who acted as courier” in Bell. “Adjutant” in Maude, Edmonds, and Dunnigan.)

Count Nostitz: Chapters 3, 14 (Garnett provides “Nostits”)

Prince Nikolai Andreyevitch Bolkonsky: Chapters 3, 12 (just “Prince Andrei’s father”)

Mortier: Chapters 9, 10

Chancellor: Chapters 10, 11 (as in Dole, Wiener, and Edmonds, “foreign minister” in Garnett.)

Prince Auersperg von Mautern: Chapter 10, 12

Lannes: Chapters 12, 19 (see “Marshal” and “Gascons” note above)

Father Kamensky: Chapters 2

Maria Theresa: Chapters 3 (a necklace with the order of her on Mack’s neck)

Fraulein Mathilde: Chapters 4 (though “Matilda” in Wiener)

Buikof: Chapters 4 (as in Dole. “Bykov” in Wiener, Dunnigan, and Edmonds. “Bykow” in Bell. “The Rat” that cleans out Denisof.)

Dokhturof: Chapters 9 (as in Dole. “Dokhturov” in Mandelker, Maude, and Edmonds. “Dohturov” in Garnett.)

Russian embassdador at the court of Vienna: Chapters 10 (as in Dole, “the ambassador at Vienna” in Bell. “Our ambassador in Vienna” in Mandelker, Dunnigan, and Briggs.)

Archduke Karl: Chapter 10 (Bell provides an alternative reading in “Charles”)

Count Vrbna: Chapter 10 (“Urbna” in Garnett and Bell, providing an alternative reading)

Count Lichtenfels: Chapter 10 (as in Dole, Mandelker, and Wiener. “Lichtenfeld” in Bell.)

Friedrich: Chapter 10 (just “Prussian king” as in Dole or “King of Prussia” as in Edmonds, Bell, and Wiener)

King of Sardinia: Chapter 10 (as in Dole. “His Sardinian Majesty” in Mandelker, Dunnigan, and Briggs)

Amelie: Chapter 11

Empress: Chapters 12 (“her majesty”)

The officer on guard: Chapter 12 (as in Dole and Bell. The one who lets the French cross the bridge. “Officer of the day” in Wiener. “Officer on duty” in Garnett.)

Grand duchess: Chapters 12 (as in Dole. “Archduchess” in Mandelker, Briggs, and Edmonds)

Belliard: Chapters 12 (see “Marshal” and “Gascons” note above)

The sergeant: Chapters 12 (“who had charge of the cannon”)

Piotr: Chapter 13 (as in Dole and Edmonds. Andrei’s “man”. Perhaps his driver from earlier. “Peter” in Maude and Wiener. “Pyotr” in Garnett, Dunnigan, and Mandelker. “Pierre” in Bell.)

Scout: Chapter 14 (the one that brings Kutuzof the news that his army is in a helpless position. “Spy” in Wiener, Dunnigan, and Maude. Bell uses “spy” and “reporter” instead of using the same word both mentions.)

Emissary: Chapter 14 (of Murat.)

Another Emissary: Chapter 14 (the one that goes to the Russian line instead of the Austrian.)

Adjutant: Chapter 14 (Bagration’s)

Winzengerode: Chapter 14 (“Vintzengerode” in the novel’s opening. Described here as “adjutant-general” as in Dole, Wiener, and Mandelker (the latter two capitalize both words). “general-adjutant” in Garnett.)

Sergeant Zakharchenko: Chapter 17 (as in Dole, Wiener, and Maude. “Zaharchenko” in Garnett.)

Sonya: Chapter 21

Natasha: Chapter 21